Fangala the Flying Feline

Every time you look at me the temperature drops a thousand degrees. Am I so bored I'm counting these? Maybe you're too stiff and stern; if you loosened up it ...

I think there's some confusion. Part 2 is already posted. Check out my portfolio if you want to read it.

I thought your first 2 1/2 stanzas were good, but then it fell through. You opinions are not my laws. My opinions are not my laws. I have no laws. ...

Wow! This is really great. Your stanzas are quick, to the point, and flow nicely. You also have a great theme that conjures vivid mental pictures. Um...I can't see anything ...

Hi, yoyo! Look, normally I don't read depressing love poems, but I thought this one was really good. Some of your imagery is especially genius, especially this line: beating, the ...

Hmm. I honestly don't know what to make of this. It's interesting--that's for sure, but I'm not sure if it has real substance. Although I must say that the ending ...

Thanks, people! I DESPERATELY need reviews on part 2, so if you're interested...

Ayra, you never cease to amaze me. This was a very sweet piece. I wouldn't call it blunt, because sometimes simplicity is better than the most elegant prose. Don't get ...

Bravo. Very nice. I was going to point out that you should spell numbers, but BBB got to it first. I like how you use short paragraphs; that's a good ...

It is nice to have a horse-writer in the neighborhood. :D Sweet story, but it didn't make a lot of sense. I couldn't get a good mental image of the ...

Thanks, gadi! Yeah, the verses were supposed to be obscurely weird and poetic, but maybe they're less poetic and more obscurely weird. :D I see your point with that one ...

Um...BBB? This wasn't supposed to be funny...

HELlo. Wow, I have, like, nothing bad to say about this. I mean, I have no idea what was going on, but I just GOT it. Dark, passionate imagery and ...

Aw, I'm sorry, Icaruss! If I had seen your post, I would definitely have responded to it.

Hey, BBB. Thanks for responding to my critique exchange idea. Anyway, I've been meaning to critique this for a while. It's SO awesome that you're writing a musical to Beautifully ...